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Orchideacae Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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It's hard to comment on a surreal photo. It has so many angles and can be viewed from so many perspectives. I love how the color, thickness and the distance o the lines vary. Also the light green dot in the middle, and some similar dots, almost unseen, are very interesting.It's just that, there is no repetition of the red lines in the upper corner, any where else in the photo.
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:iconreganprime:
ReganPrime Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Nice Work. :)
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   Photographer
Thanks :-)
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SAVALISTE Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Photographer
I've featured this deviation on my page for a week
savaliste.deviantart.com/journ…
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Photographer
Thank you very much :-)
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moscaliovam Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Decisively right lines!
:)
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:heart:
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Photographer
:aww: :bow:
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:iconbribesdemoi:
bribesdemoi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
I like the abstraction here, the fact that even with abstract subjects you managed to have three different depths. I am amused because I have no idea what I am looking at. Because it is so abstract, it is hard for me to tell whether anything is truly missing or could be improved. I take it as it is !

I spent some time on your gallery. It is very impressive. Keep up the good work !
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014   Photographer
Thank you very much for your extensive and kind comment :w00t:
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:iconbribesdemoi:
bribesdemoi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
you are welcome !
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:iconmylittlebluesky:
mylittlebluesky Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this picture! The mix of colors is great, and the lines create a nice movement effect. Lovely :clap:
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Photographer
Thank you very much for your comment :-)
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:icondiddrick:
diddrick Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
étrange et beau a la fois ça m interpelle , très jolie.
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Photographer
Merci beaucoup :-)
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:icondiddrick:
diddrick Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
il n'y as pas de quoi.
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Photographer
:-)
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:iconcheslah:
cheslah Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Professional Photographer
I really love the bright colors against the dark background!  I really don't have any idea what this is though! lol. 
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Photographer
Thank you :w00t:

Btw, it´s a street with the lights of three moving cars :D
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:iconcheslah:
cheslah Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional Photographer
Oh wow.  I wouldn't have ever guessed that! :D
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014   Photographer
:-)
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love the composition of this abstract piece!

The slight grain adds to the piece. I like the bokeh and the light streaking!
Nicely done here. 
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Photographer
Thank you for your kind comment :aww:
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:iconeden-kitsch:
Eden-Kitsch Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice colour and composition. Love the simplicity.
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   Photographer
Thank you :w00t:
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:iconeden-kitsch:
Eden-Kitsch Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Welcome! :bug:
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WTek79 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful rays of light ! Excellent abstract ! :clap:
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014   Photographer
Thank you :bow:
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LeftUnfinished Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love it!
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:iconfremdart:
freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   Photographer
Thank you :-)
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WintersRead Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Photographer
I was hoping this was the Depeche Mode song, and you didn't disappoint. It is a very nice inspiration for this image, and fits well. :clap:
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freMDart Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014   Photographer
Thank you :bow:

When I took the photo, it was almost the first thing that came to mind :-)
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Panasonic
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DMC-G6
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2/1 second
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F/22.0
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75 mm
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160
Date Taken
Dec 31, 2013, 5:45:22 PM
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Adobe Photoshop Elements 12.0 Windows
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